The Resurrection of the Air Conditioner

Yesterday, a cleaning technician came to my house to clean the air conditioner.

The air conditioner in my room had no chance to be cleaned becasuse of the idolness of me. As a result, the air conditioner did not work well even though setting the temperture gets lowered.

After the cleaning, the air conditioner has regained its original quality, making my room quite comfortable. This must be heaven!!

As a matter of fact, the un-functional air conditioner brought about lowered quality of my life. Gettig sweat almost all day, low quality of sleeping time and so on.

Anyway the heat is unimaginably high outside, but it seems that I would live a better summer life. Cleaning air conditioners by professionals is my strongest recomendation for now. Thank you and have a nice summer.

(15min,770words)

＜日本語訳＞by Google Translation

昨日、エアコンの掃除に清掃業者が家に来ました。

私の怠け癖のせいで、部屋のエアコンは掃除する機会がありませんでした。その結果、設定温度を下げてもエアコンがうまく機能しませんでした。

掃除後、エアコンは元の状態に戻り、部屋はとても快適になりました。これは天国に違いありません!!

実際、機能しないエアコンは私の生活の質を低下させました。ほぼ一日中汗をかき、睡眠の質が低下しました。

とにかく外の暑さは想像を絶するほど高いですが、より良い夏の生活が送れそうです。今のところ、専門家によるエアコンの掃除が私の最大のお勧めです。ありがとうございました。良い夏をお過ごしください。

＊ChatGTPによる添削

• 語彙のミス

  • idolness → idleness
  • temperture → temperature
  • un-functional → non-functional

• 文法のミス

  • "because of the idolness of me" → "because of my idleness"
  • "setting the temperture gets lowered" → "even when the temperature was lowered"
  • "regained its original quality" → "regained its original efficiency"
  • "This must be heaven!!" → "This feels like heaven!"
  • "brought about lowered quality of my life" → "caused a lower quality of life"
  • "Getting sweat almost all day" → "Sweating almost all day"
  • "low quality of sleeping time" → "poor quality sleep"
  • "it seems that I would live a better summer life" → "it seems that I will have a better summer"
  • "strongest recommendation" → "top recommendation"

＊ChatGTPによる模範解答

Yesterday, a cleaning technician came to my house to clean the air conditioner. The air conditioner in my room hadn't been cleaned due to my idleness. As a result, the air conditioner did not work well even when the temperature was lowered.

After the cleaning, the air conditioner regained its original efficiency, making my room quite comfortable. This feels like heaven!

In fact, the non-functional air conditioner caused a lower quality of life: sweating almost all day, poor quality sleep, and so on.

Anyway, the heat outside is unimaginably high, but it seems that I will have a better summer now. Cleaning air conditioners by professionals is my top recommendation for now. Thank you and have a nice summer.

＊所感

相変わらず文法ミスが多い。というより適切なコロケーションがボロボロな気がする。

ああ、なんか萎えるな。改善の兆しがないのが辛い。

とりあえず続けてみることにしよう。